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#14315

How do you find the stories!

• This topic was modified 5 months ago by Joshua.
• This topic was modified 5 months ago by Joshua.
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[Olivia]

#14830

My thoughts on Underneath my Bed

Oh my goodness, what a fun piece! Even with the word count limitations (only 100 words), you manage to flesh out such an interesting story with such funny implications (also pretty spooky ones!)

I love the voice of this piece and how fun it is, I am biased because I love horror stories, but for such a short piece, you manage to work a lot into it.

[Olivia]

#14831

My thoughts on I Miei Segreti Nascosti: The Underworld

I love the pacing and descriptions of this piece. How it starts with long, beautiful descriptions of waves and sand and how busy everything is before shifting into a deserted beach and a buried secret. This shift was so fun to uncover and unpack whilst reading it, it also just makes me wonder… what is your secret?

Do we ever find out? Do you know what it is?

[Joshua]

#14843

Cough..cough Italian crime underworld ;) Does have potential to be expanded into a longer novella for sure.

[Olivia]

#14888

Hehehehhe, revenge! (I just read Blood Money)

[Joshua]

#14932

Was a really nice piece. Enjoyed the integrated humour and satire. Reminds me of the Eat Me poem by Patience Agbabi.

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